﻿<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?><rss version="2.0"><channel><title>wickedpen's Xanga</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/</link><description>Latest Xanga weblog from wickedpen</description><language>en-us</language><ttl>60</ttl><image><title>The Weblog Community</title><url>http://s.xanga.com/images/xangalogobutton.gif</url><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/</link></image><item><title>Monday, June 06, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/278134752/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/278134752/item/</guid><pubDate>Mon, 06 Jun 2005 19:14:13 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;I think I shall hence be closing up shop hereabouts and moving completely over to blogger.&amp;nbsp; My layout options look ever so much more snazzier.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;A href="http://kristybowen.blogspot.com" target=_new&gt;kristybowen.blogspot.com&lt;/A&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;If you need me, you know where to find me....&lt;/P&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/278134752/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Tuesday, March 01, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213635807/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213635807/item/</guid><pubDate>Tue, 01 Mar 2005 02:52:59 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;The broadside from the Poetry Center is finally here: &lt;/P&gt;&lt;align="left" target="_new"&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;IMG height=400 src="http://www.poetrycenter.org/reading/broadsides/images/bowen_big.gif"&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213635807/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Monday, February 28, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213465408/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213465408/item/</guid><pubDate>Mon, 28 Feb 2005 23:31:04 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;This sounds way cool, but sadly I have to work and I didn't know about it enough in advance to swap schedules, but if you're in town, definitely go..since it's so close to work,&amp;nbsp;I may sneak over if I can for an hour or so....&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;B&gt;Chicago—POETRY Magazine is proud to announce&amp;nbsp; the 1st Annual &lt;BR&gt;Printers’ Ball in celebration&amp;nbsp; of Chicago print to be held on &lt;BR&gt;Thursday, March 3, 2005. The event&amp;nbsp; will occur from 6:00&amp;nbsp; p.m – 9:00 &lt;BR&gt;p.m. at the HotHouse, 31 E. Balbo Ave., Chicago,&amp;nbsp; IL.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;BR&gt;Co-sponsored by Another Chicago Magazine, The Bird Machine, Bridge,&amp;nbsp; Chicago Review, Firebelly Design, FOUND Magazine,&amp;nbsp; The Guild Complex,&amp;nbsp;In These&amp;nbsp; Times,&amp;nbsp; Independent&amp;nbsp; Press Association of Chicago, Lumpen, NewCity,&amp;nbsp; Pistil, The Poetry Center of Chicago, Other Voices,&amp;nbsp;Punk Planet, Quimby’s,&amp;nbsp; The Reader, Stop Smiling, StoryQuarterly, TENbyTEN, THE&amp;nbsp; 2NDHAND, TriQuarterly, and Venus, the event will showcase&amp;nbsp; a diverse selection of Chicago-based print publications including magazines, journals, and weeklies.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;BR&gt;Conceived of as an opportunity&amp;nbsp; to celebrate and explore Chicago’s &lt;BR&gt;vibrant print scene, the&amp;nbsp; event offers readers and writers a unique &lt;BR&gt;chance to sample publications&amp;nbsp; and meet with editors and designers. &lt;BR&gt;“The Printers’ Ball&amp;nbsp; is a celebration of Chicago print and the &lt;BR&gt;readers who keep it alive,” says&amp;nbsp; POETRY’s assistant editor Fred &lt;BR&gt;Sasaki. “And how often&amp;nbsp; are the editors of Punk Planet and POETRY in the same room?”&lt;BR&gt;&lt;BR&gt;The&amp;nbsp; Printers’ Ball is open to the public and admission&amp;nbsp; is free. For &lt;BR&gt;&amp;nbsp; more information, please call 312.799.8005.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/B&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213465408/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Monday, February 28, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213228629/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213228629/item/</guid><pubDate>Mon, 28 Feb 2005 17:17:50 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;Here's the text from the entire interview I was talking about:&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;B&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;********************************************&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;B&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;DePaul Magazine&lt;BR&gt;Winter, 2005 &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Prize-winning Poet Wields ‘Wicked Pen’&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/B&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The words come in snippets, images glimpsed out a window or triggered by a book, jotted down on a notebook for further pondering.&lt;/P&gt;&lt;I&gt;Unlit rooms will ruin us,&lt;BR&gt;a squall of glass slippers,&lt;BR&gt;conjugation, mimesis obscured.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/I&gt;--from “Narrowing”&lt;BR&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Sometimes, they come in a torrent, falling fully formed onto the page.&lt;/P&gt;&lt;I&gt;What woman’s body&lt;BR&gt;doesn’t start and hum&lt;BR&gt;with the moon, tiny&lt;BR&gt;wildness beating inside&lt;BR&gt;like a drum.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/I&gt;--from “Witchcraft” &lt;I&gt;&lt;/I&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Then the real work begins, says poet Kristy Bowen (LAS ‘99) who recently won first place in the Poetry Center of Chicago’s 10&lt;SUP&gt;th&lt;/SUP&gt; Annual Juried Reading.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;She pours over the words, tweaking and pushing, seeking the right rhythm and sound. She returns to the poem again and again, even after it’s been published.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;“I don’t think I ever know it’s done. I’ll publish something and then put it together for something else, a chapbook or online journal, and it’s a different version,” she says.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;By day, Bowen is a mild-mannered library assistant at Columbia College Chicago, helping faculty and students find the information they need.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;But at night, she becomes Wicked Pen, weaving feminism, folklore, and erotica into “muscular lyric poems” that are “sculptural, opaque, and suggestive as beach glass,” according to the Poetry Center of Chicago’s website.&lt;/P&gt;&lt;I&gt;Knows that only some return&lt;BR&gt;home safely, the others&lt;BR&gt;lost to kitchens and wind.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/I&gt;--from “Sweet”&lt;BR&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Bowen was nearly lost to poetry, enrolling at DePaul to earn a masters degree in English as preparation to teach it in high school or college. Instead, she discovered the poetry of William Butler Yeats and, through it, her own voice.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;“I started writing short stories in college and discovered that I could translate the same things into poems, and they were better,” she says.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;She now writes daily, submitting her work to online and print journals. She has been nominated twice for the Pushcart Prize, an award given only to small press authors.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;She also founded and edits her own online journal, &lt;I&gt;Wicked Alice&lt;/I&gt;, sifting and formatting the submissions of other poets she likes. She’s published two chapbooks&lt;I&gt;, Bloody Mary &lt;/I&gt;and &lt;I&gt;The Archaeologist’s Daughter,” &lt;/I&gt;as well as a print version of &lt;I&gt;Wicked Alice.&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/I&gt;
&lt;P&gt;“The more I have things accepted, the more I publish, the more I am inspired to write,” she says, “It strengthens your belief that you can do it.”&lt;/P&gt;&lt;B&gt;
&lt;P&gt;To read more of Bowen’s work or for a schedule of her poetry readings, visit:&lt;BR&gt;&lt;A href="http://www.angelfire.com/poetry/wickedpen" target="_new"&gt;www.angelfire.com/poetry/wickedpen&lt;/A&gt;&lt;/B&gt;.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;*************************************************&lt;/P&gt;&lt;I&gt;&lt;/I&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/213228629/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Saturday, February 26, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211916737/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211916737/item/</guid><pubDate>Sat, 26 Feb 2005 13:41:52 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;The description is oddly dead-on, except for the part about Kerouac. And the picture, well nothing like a little eye candy on a Saturday morning.... &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;A href="http://rumandmonkey.com/widgets/toys/testgen/271/" target=_new&gt;&lt;IMG title="You're the Tortured Intellectual!" alt="You're the Tortured Intellectual!" src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/7/271/847.jpg" border=0&gt;&lt;/A&gt;&lt;BR&gt;You're the Tortured Intellectual!&lt;BR&gt;&lt;A href="http://rumandmonkey.com/widgets/toys/testgen/271/" target=_new&gt;Take What sort of Hipster are you? today!&lt;/A&gt;&lt;BR&gt;&lt;SMALL&gt;Created with &lt;A href="http://rumandmonkey.com/" target=_new&gt;Rum and Monkey&lt;/A&gt;'s &lt;A href="http://rumandmonkey.com/widgets/toys/testgen/" target=_new&gt;Personality Test Generator&lt;/A&gt;.&lt;/SMALL&gt; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;DIV&gt;You're sensitive, you're emotional, and you wonder why everyone else in the world exists on a different plane. You cannot eat, breathe, or sleep without analyzing each action to death. You're usually sombre, depressed, lethargic, but you can be nearly glad from time to time. You wear whatever you can find on your cluttered bedroom floor. You carry books, notepads, reading glasses with you wherever you go. You have friends, but only a few who truly get where you're coming from. You frequent coffee shops, libraries, and the less crowded bars. You're obsessed with past people, past ideas, past lives. You wish you could die and be reborn as Jack Kerouac.&lt;/DIV&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211916737/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Saturday, February 26, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211798918/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211798918/item/</guid><pubDate>Sat, 26 Feb 2005 04:38:26 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;I just got my copy of the DePaul mag with my little interview in it.&amp;nbsp; And I quote:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;"By day, Bowen is a mild-mannered library assistant at Columbia College, helping faculty and students find the information they need.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;But at night, she becomes Wicked Pen, weaving feminism, folklore, and erotica into "muscular lyric poems" that are "sculptural, opaque and suggestive as beach glass" according the Poetry Center's website."&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Makes me sound like a comic book character...mild mannered nearly dropped me....&lt;/P&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211798918/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Friday, February 25, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211487450/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/211487450/item/</guid><pubDate>Fri, 25 Feb 2005 19:42:51 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"&gt;&lt;SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"&gt;
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&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;Soon, all your poems have trains.&lt;SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/SPAN&gt;&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;Lurid, erotic places plagued&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
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&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
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&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;even oranges begin to fever you,&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
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&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
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&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;dimensions than this, the muscles&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;that twitch electric each time&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;you remember &lt;I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"&gt;cold&lt;/I&gt;.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/210943657/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Thursday, February 24, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/210939972/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/210939972/item/</guid><pubDate>Thu, 24 Feb 2005 21:49:55 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;One week into the semester and I'm already feeling buried.&amp;nbsp; Not including the stuff I need to get done on the next DGP title, plus any of my own writing, I have an inordinate amount of reading to do for the craft class, both print and online, as well as three response entries for the workshop to poems, journal, online media, or performances.&amp;nbsp; Add in the critique of my classmates work, and I'm, about ready for one of those panic-induced list-making frenzies.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; I want to try doing the poem a day thing, have been pretty good the last week or so about trying to draft something every day, but fear it's gonna fall off very soon.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;About halfway through last nights workshop, I had the urge to walk out.&amp;nbsp; We didn't actually get to my poems, one of which was "Spectra", the other one which I'll post shortly.&amp;nbsp; Even as we were doing other people's poems, I kept telling myself how ridiculous it all seems.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; One person telling another that they shouldn't write about something the way they wrote about it.&amp;nbsp; Or that the poem doesn't convey what the poet intends it to convey.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; I kept thinking, exactly what are we doing this for?&amp;nbsp; What's to be gained?&amp;nbsp; One poet decided she was going to cut up the poem of another poet, and when she read her version it sounded like a poem SHE would write, not resembling the original person's voice at all.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I understand critique to a certain point.&amp;nbsp; I&amp;nbsp;don't mind&amp;nbsp;giving, or getting,&amp;nbsp;advice on whether or not an image really works, or whether the lines flow, or whether something makes the line clunky, or unweildy, whether the language is fresh and vivid.&amp;nbsp; However, I fully believe criticism should&amp;nbsp;stay true to the poet's voice and the intended world of the poem.&amp;nbsp; So I can say, "you might want to rethink this image" or "this line would be better without this word"--all of which are subject to contention.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Never, "I don't like the voice here" or (my fucking favorite) "this is too EASY.." or "too narrative." &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;And still that doesn't answer the WHY...yes we want to make our work the best it can be....but I'm not sure that's what happens...especially when no one really agrees on anything, we all have different styles and goals, things we think are important in poetry.&amp;nbsp; I think making your work better might be accomplished better in an environment where the point is not to pick the poem apart incessantly, but to share, discuss, &amp;nbsp;and appreciate the work, and in turn, learn from other poets.&amp;nbsp; And mostly just from READING....&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;And what is the goal?&amp;nbsp; To make something publishable?&amp;nbsp; There are so many different ideas out there about what "publishable" poetry really is, and so many styles and schools.&amp;nbsp; I think the key is finding your audience.&amp;nbsp; You can't workshop Billy Collins into being Jorie Graham, or vice-versa.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;It's just not going to work.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/210939972/item/#firstcomment</comments></item><item><title>Tuesday, February 22, 2005</title><link>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/209250581/item/</link><guid>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/209250581/item/</guid><pubDate>Tue, 22 Feb 2005 01:21:33 GMT</pubDate><description>&lt;P&gt;This is intended to be a score-like poem, part of &lt;I&gt;errata&lt;/I&gt;&amp;nbsp; On the page covers three columns, but I couldn't manage that here.&amp;nbsp; It's designed to be read by three voices, though I haven't yet tried this out, so we'll see...imagine that each section is read simultaneously, or near simultaneously, and you'll get the effect...&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;B&gt;after the bleeding hour&lt;/B&gt;&lt;BR&gt;&lt;I&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; a poem for three voices&lt;/I&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;What lingers&amp;nbsp; is the scent of cinnamon, &lt;BR&gt;an affinity for ellipsis.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Thievery is not uncommon.&lt;BR&gt;The other a fist full of matches.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The rooms are filled with fever.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The doctor, with his love&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;We have taken everything.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Except for what is fastened &lt;BR&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;******&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;strange viral inconsistencies in the&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;and placed&amp;nbsp; in tight sheeted beds. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Once, the bed beneath the fire eater&lt;BR&gt;surrendered up a tiny blackened mouse.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;of sharp things. This love of anesthetic&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;except for what is absent, what is dear.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The rooms are filled with fever.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;********&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;sternum.&amp;nbsp; This love of anesthetic &lt;BR&gt;One of us takes a blanket.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The rooms are filled with fever.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;When she said it felt as if&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Dark, arterial splay&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;I&gt;we will not speak of it, for when it comes&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;like a kite to a string.&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description><comments>http://wickedpen.xanga.com/209250581/item/#firstcomment</comments></item></channel></rss>